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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网

(一) 同义反译法
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
2. I'll be here for good this time.
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) , t  E* ~8 x. }$ F2 C
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out. + f, P2 n+ @; b! B/ V6 U0 b# @
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) 7 }7 o2 e3 t& u  `
4. "Wait, he is serious."
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) 1 I; h# q2 x" ~/ a3 U
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) ( K' O3 t# o" ^/ }6 E
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(二) 删减解释词 5 \3 F4 N8 I  d  V% [& t' Y+ s
例子：
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of 1 r+ c5 f' P" y- Q
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a & L' \# W6 y( H3 G/ D" W6 s
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。

(三) 短句拆译 ( Z& S8 H% n, E# W0 u& L( S
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" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」 * @' `( G' L- p3 X6 @2 N9 q
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(四) 译词推陈出新
例子：
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
lower. , |) q" E: Z( u$ Y8 z( {. ~( O
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。 # m, `2 {( _! a! g2 v2 `/ G. }
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。
原词原译改译
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when 当......的时候等到......的时候
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act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求 # q6 E! B& e5 z" ]; c

a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人

ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 : Y$ l4 _! g8 ]& _5 S
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了8 y" k  s. R8 h( f& S& i

(五) 解释性添词
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"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have ; j5 K' \, F: a/ S
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet ' U9 ^# C2 e1 E! H# H
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。
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(六) 词无定译
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It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or # Y! S6 H6 R+ ]
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later,
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous   x) e2 ?5 S+ ?% o7 _
conditions. $ U  a% Q* C: d6 e
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。5 d9 n+ o$ _7 h8 v
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(七) 精炼译词 ) U0 D2 U9 ?8 A4 e  c
例子： ) X" }5 }0 A/ U5 F4 X( A) g1 h: {
A new dignity crept into his walk.
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。
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(八) 删削"When"字 ( F! r5 ~2 t4 \6 s$ Q$ J, P& E- N
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1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......)
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the % D7 x3 \- Y6 ?& m! g- z
head, and knocking on them round?"
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)

(九) 感叹词的不同译法
例子：
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want 4 _( _' I, ?! x% F2 U0 K1 h, o
them!" ; y8 j& z! q3 ?$ p
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" * p6 J8 b" K8 d
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.")
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to : B5 o7 y4 I! n8 w( S. E$ b1 |
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader, ' ~7 G& w# |$ M( q! [
jocularly; ... . N' P) _( U: Q5 H
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy - X+ u& V/ Q3 A# l
interval of silence. 1 Z4 O! q- U( _. T' e
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」)
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；...... 5 o2 Q3 @+ V) ?
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。
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(十) 顺拆法
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His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic, 5 S8 u- s1 D8 X  a3 ~/ ]) J
social and demographic factors. 0 X. }% \* S3 F/ L4 u
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 - f, }2 W3 Y9 W$ Y! r" a9 ^. @
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。
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(十一) 倒拆法 0 ]9 l$ ?5 v9 E/ Y& y
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To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his / Q" I& D% u0 ?! ^' i* B
supposed conditon. + {  Y( |9 d- `
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。
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(十二) 抽词拆句法 - p& w8 w. _# B; D9 K: _; w% }
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All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of 1 B4 U/ B2 o) U* G) l' A; N
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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