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作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网
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& u7 m; y% i) N; s7 v2 z(一) 同义反译法
( O( R% Q) j$ u' M* \例子：
) h) H/ y1 A4 p$ ?9 }1. Only three customers remained in the bar. " z9 w/ G: s# c+ P ~& X9 ]
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) 9 Z6 }# ^4 g" j3 z. w! x9 l
2. I'll be here for good this time. ! `) H# j* |" G6 g, P9 p
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」)
6 u+ U- i9 q% U0 L3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out. 6 [0 s- a- v7 X; F" Q) N, A
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) 5 i$ P! V7 l" I$ a
4. "Wait, he is serious."
, r5 `; H& {+ Z* o0 M「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) * @, R+ h" v) G; y& m
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
& t- B* w0 m& N3 n6 B「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) , [6 ], U1 ?) N8 X8 f1 P
# K% z9 u) k/ F0 ^% i2 J+ e" t(二) 删减解释词
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- i; V) H4 j% TThe traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of % ? b7 y- s6 d; _- R# Y
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
7 p& W9 F- N4 O8 aparticular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
3 |9 V7 k4 s) O: m到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。' r( ^1 p* ^2 r# F1 w& n! t& q/ p, Y
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(三) 短句拆译 0 `7 `* c' @ j% w' p
例子：
% |" R; `7 h$ i. V& s" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
# y! o! c, _' d' j' i「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」 # x) Y+ }$ {! }2 ?( {( J
O$ a8 E8 N1 h [(四) 译词推陈出新 4 m# F* _% W: O L" U9 d R) u
例子：
4 j: w$ G! W1 n, x+ R1 c0 XWhen he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
% q! V5 ]$ c& G) O/ P% d% e4 o& d$ Edoubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a ) |" S9 n6 _- w' ~
lower. 5 V: S4 J) u3 k. n# Z- S/ f- U
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。 ' C/ K8 n% X. i( T' x" s) a
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 * M U/ X$ D5 c/ g5 y% F: m' _ O
原词 原译 改译 * O8 E: z" G7 h) w1 N* n/ [' O0 V! [
: ^$ H1 Z) [0 c) Ewhen 当......的时候 等到......的时候
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act with boldness 大胆行动 放胆去追求
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1 ~3 C1 V8 G" @, h; I1 e( Za lover 一个情人 一般堕入情网的人 " e+ B7 A) s+ R3 k* T: g2 [
, i# x3 l* V. Xordinary fears 普通的害怕 种种常有的提心吊胆的心理
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in addition to 除了......之外 那就更是难免的了
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3 R1 R; l, X5 r) E$ O(五) 解释性添词
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"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have 8 Q$ V4 v1 y& h' `' L: B6 n
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
+ T7 ?7 { F9 D; p( X( R7 ]never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
5 K; m3 Q" K% C f: \. E' band the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
- v, X- d2 ]% f1 a1 h「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。 3 j5 U3 o- u) f
& s) {& u! K3 L! n; t% B(六) 词无定译 . F1 S( J" ^+ W/ l+ _1 F
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It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or
7 W% u7 M$ o% fcivilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later,
1 b' t% @# G9 hhe carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous 3 L# Q5 N7 o" g
conditions.
h- F% ~! z; P% L! I2 B我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。
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8 O$ E6 `. l; Y' r(七) 精炼译词 - R$ }, B# w, h1 Q; r
例子：
4 c+ x3 }) v- qA new dignity crept into his walk.
0 L l& L6 d6 x! r8 C) `原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
/ [5 h0 T; j3 S+ v8 G1 z改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。
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(八) 删削"When"字
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1. When he saw me, he was startled. 7 ^( U/ O( h" {3 a/ {
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) H" D k7 {% N0 ?# f0 V1 [* r
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the 1 o+ l I) ]/ @: r
head, and knocking on them round?" 8 q: b% W5 j! N" p, c8 C
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......) - M% p$ E2 U, t h! R# R
# y z& O V& p: P" w(九) 感叹词的不同译法
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them!" 3 u7 ?1 y% Y) g# f4 S# i
"Why, Eva, your room is full now." # y8 a4 K- H2 M2 v" T5 p
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 ' N4 P" f6 m% D" m8 I
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
* I8 H% }) _) R2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?"
. P3 U8 \- @9 C: N* O; F「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
& l% x; r& ~! @1 u: V+ |3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") 2 [/ [: A+ {- k6 T
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to 0 ^3 k1 G* k! Y
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
8 d5 X# h9 G; T( Ojocularly; ...
0 V2 w5 r1 E$ W' ["Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
3 v3 D* S& n3 d$ u# I, Pinterval of silence.
4 L# i2 E4 ~& p" o5 ?(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) ! \1 W' \7 a8 r
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
3 g" I9 f+ M, N* M6 I W「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 I+ ?' ?" _# [- r. P% f
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(十) 顺拆法 : e* |0 _3 U# R
例子：
) O- U5 z+ [! p3 R7 u) bHis delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
( t: p9 A3 [) r5 j" j- ^& W# t. g4 A! xworking/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
% \* H' B( |# w0 T) u- f! @1 N4 zsocial and demographic factors.
: M& Q7 o4 _% Z原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 : y1 E; L5 r. N- m3 |# R
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。
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(十一) 倒拆法
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( Z! R& s5 g+ q: DTo him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
+ d% m3 }- l) T1 k& B0 lfor the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his 8 B8 J, m6 p: ~
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要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。 7 [ E) g( A( h1 ~, ]
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(十二) 抽词拆句法 1 X8 {% q# y- q! x! O( Z- `
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All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the 7 _, m8 n$ c7 l4 l+ U/ R. h
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of $ L2 Q$ Q8 ]. t( d7 ?% ^& z' y
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. 3 l% W' F7 t1 ~" S
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。 |
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