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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网6 f  |' x! `. ~" i8 d" ]% |' i; E3 H

(一) 同义反译法
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1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
2. I'll be here for good this time.
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) $ x: x$ q! S& E, v+ Z
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out. " @5 l4 N5 \2 L+ T9 a
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」)
4. "Wait, he is serious."
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」)
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」)
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(二) 删减解释词 0 c. x5 S, P4 m( `. N% q* M( R
例子： 7 T- w5 _. g  \8 p$ I6 V! |6 g
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。% y  w  a+ J9 B& K

(三) 短句拆译 9 n1 _5 Q& }3 ]) @9 G+ c2 N! O; N; k
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" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..." 6 U6 ~- y$ F# U* I7 W! j* y$ y
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」

(四) 译词推陈出新
例子：
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
lower.
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。 ( h& p2 m: Z, `) ], E
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 + z6 V0 D: w  y/ p
原词原译改译 : y4 i8 A. Y% |* d6 Y! S
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when 当......的时候等到......的时候
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act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求 , z) i& {0 ~# B! B
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a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人 6 @- n) H  `) |% f9 y! k
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了) u$ Q& V" V. \, m( d
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(五) 解释性添词 % i2 V: j0 ^( m% R3 E8 c5 j
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"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet. " c( _4 s6 S$ L% f
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。

(六) 词无定译 . u: T9 F. q8 T% c  @5 H( G
例子：
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, . f  N6 O( ]% _# b% z0 X+ d
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions.
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。' [# h# P& H# c- q/ |* `1 o2 `

(七) 精炼译词 # N8 e6 W5 [9 M8 P/ q2 {( ]
例子： $ T6 c4 J1 t% l1 i# S5 \
A new dignity crept into his walk.
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。

(八) 删削"When"字 + O5 Y5 M, `- U6 H, x5 @
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1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......)
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the 4 Q. K2 z; r5 v2 p8 e6 b8 L9 o9 k
head, and knocking on them round?" 1 @* V  [: T$ M$ X
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......) ) U2 {( w# i  S. A, g. I+ g

(九) 感叹词的不同译法 ; A+ T: c4 c( x/ {
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1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
them!"
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 . B" H1 i, Y% X; D
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" 0 I1 z+ v3 x( D
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」 3 x$ l- a/ w$ G
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.")
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to ( M; @5 H. D$ {1 B
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
jocularly; ... 0 k8 z9 s& ?6 \3 t
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
interval of silence.
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) ' v1 d3 Q9 o# b6 G
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；...... 1 T( j& y3 R( b9 q6 N7 ]
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。
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(十) 顺拆法 $ H, @7 X: G/ l5 t! o" A3 y0 r
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His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue ! w/ L% X# Y/ o% c( Z# B2 H
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic, ( Q( [: h1 v/ g$ c
social and demographic factors.
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。

(十一) 倒拆法 * ~5 p. O3 J7 d; X; L6 ^8 N- z
例子：
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon. 2 O5 Y. K" z" U" o  n
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。

(十二) 抽词拆句法
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the : K( o5 s/ L$ B. F7 `
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of 3 J+ ^0 k6 u+ }' E9 X* u
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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