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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网
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(一) 同义反译法
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar. / E* m1 A# v, g$ t! T/ n3 e, B1 d
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) : v$ X' @: |* L& i: ]6 I
2. I'll be here for good this time. , m0 U) H/ O4 z7 h0 w
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) # {9 I9 y: @( [5 m; C- x
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」)
4. "Wait, he is serious." 7 K+ F3 ]' x- O* k
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」)
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) ! L) T4 L( Z4 q% V6 q
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(二) 删减解释词
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The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a - E) {  N' v2 K) Z/ Y8 z- B$ J/ B0 m
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。& l9 i) u5 c% w9 C) i. R
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(三) 短句拆译
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."   X6 \" Y, i# o7 A! p
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」

(四) 译词推陈出新 1 s  d0 f/ u8 Z
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When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with 7 {* r$ @7 G! q. {- C
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a , w5 B6 a* R/ J+ X$ d1 M$ \' y6 \/ ?
lower.   v( C4 a8 z+ S  U( t8 ?
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。
原词原译改译

when 当......的时候等到......的时候 & j4 _+ ?5 M4 H( a1 l
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act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求
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a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人

ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理

in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了2 f7 c  M9 M& ]7 q  K) h
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(五) 解释性添词 9 f1 ]0 G! t( o0 N' b0 P. b+ g3 k
例子：
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have . D3 D+ x9 i# S( n4 C$ F" G* D
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet 1 F* q1 \7 O: Z/ U3 |; l
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet. 5 p2 W2 {# s/ J3 e" k+ a! \5 H8 N
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。
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(六) 词无定译 " R/ B) ^9 {' ?: w* P) Z
例子：
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or 7 I8 J/ B8 M! l0 [7 X' o9 Q7 C
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later,
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions.
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。

(七) 精炼译词   k' H4 @# T. U' Q6 T
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A new dignity crept into his walk.
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。 " Z/ D9 s, p9 l0 E0 t

(八) 删削"When"字
例子：  E1 Z! [- s$ Z! m: f# o2 P( {
1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) ! N, Z  I0 Y7 f4 h8 u/ W% z
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the . c/ @* \' b, e* P/ @1 a
head, and knocking on them round?" 0 t- L5 Q' L% X' V4 w
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......) + W! Y2 a+ m, c& j$ U; ~
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(九) 感叹词的不同译法 % V6 ~5 w) Y2 B
例子：
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want + L+ o+ O. C' t! F; R
them!"
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」   d- J& y. u4 q2 C0 f
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 ' Y  M1 s) @% b: L  p
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?"
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」 4 d: w! y6 x9 x; u# p
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.")
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to ( [8 j: t. D: o' v
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
jocularly; ... , H; H8 O7 D# c
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
interval of silence. $ c: o4 `: Y3 d- E% k6 K
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」)   Q! x% L0 F" [* T5 k2 M
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 ) \& G( |+ O! a  H. g. T
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(十) 顺拆法
例子：
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic, * w9 @" q  g0 k% E$ q3 ~2 ?) [# w
social and demographic factors. ) |) F& A" f, j2 W. W! ]9 N
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。 5 E) H* y) s* @( q) i
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(十一) 倒拆法
例子：
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute / $ j9 t& R& @9 |- I# F7 n8 G$ J
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。 ' N7 i4 B3 }4 R$ u" Z0 a* J

(十二) 抽词拆句法 ( E; G) y' I; K* b" n5 V
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All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of 7 _5 x6 y8 t$ n" c8 D6 l
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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