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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网6 U+ b6 m0 {" ~8 M4 H

(一) 同义反译法
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1. Only three customers remained in the bar. 6 l: F0 |4 d+ k  C2 ?. e
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) 5 H$ C3 v% C6 S
2. I'll be here for good this time.
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) 7 J9 r" k7 t; a* j* Z$ }
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」)
4. "Wait, he is serious." & T3 u9 S; H7 R  u9 _! ?
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) , m* ~; Z# N9 k2 F5 b7 d' K
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) ; E9 E" h- r8 B! M# W. s$ c$ t
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(二) 删减解释词
例子：
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of " o* X9 F! ~: U) R; l) y
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women. $ I9 ]3 e8 y- i
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。
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(三) 短句拆译
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" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」 0 p% i, [: S3 G7 l
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(四) 译词推陈出新
例子：
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a : k* Z7 |% _1 e, ~- p
lower.
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 & {) R! @5 q8 V5 \- D
原词原译改译
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when 当......的时候等到......的时候 * [* d! {; }+ P2 N8 h8 d' ]! T

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求 % z1 L% V1 A8 u8 V# Z; ]
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a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人 3 T$ K' w' d0 ]" ^" g& G& B3 M: Q
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 * W; ~# ]' w$ c/ v5 z' R
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了
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(五) 解释性添词
例子： / M  p* \3 V/ Q% w( s" U7 O9 [
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet. 7 w# y- K, [' P$ t& _* ^
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。 4 w8 n% a1 d' H; K; K

(六) 词无定译
例子：
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or : z! l% A3 r$ k. [
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later,
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions. " a- E; @% f* I# k2 @/ z: D
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。

(七) 精炼译词 $ Q) d4 e( Y9 r6 _$ |& i* R' p
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A new dignity crept into his walk. , G8 r- K3 R" ~& H
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。

(八) 删削"When"字 0 z, V* _+ m1 l! n. l
例子：
1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) ) W) K5 D$ A, N" i* V' c, l: B4 o0 I
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the 1 {/ v/ R2 F: A# D& n
head, and knocking on them round?"
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......) / b2 }+ l  p6 y8 ^: u* E

(九) 感叹词的不同译法
例子：
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want + \4 H7 j, V' C$ y+ h+ S, F: h
them!"
"Why, Eva, your room is full now." + i- i0 b$ J: y6 w3 v  n1 f# D8 d9 d
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」   p' J& Q1 V/ h0 j
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 9 K0 {: V, U5 x: Z: k& [7 Q
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" . n6 _1 Z  D& ~" d/ _
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.")
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to # z$ \" c6 V$ n9 R% P
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader, ; @1 k6 L* f* W
jocularly; ...
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
interval of silence. 1 z- C$ z+ G$ y2 G2 J% P
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) ' R& l! ]9 d2 b
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；...... - s4 B! C/ N. ?8 N" v( _  M
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。

(十) 顺拆法
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His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic, * v* S5 Y2 Z' y6 p% V" G7 u0 |+ A$ `
social and demographic factors. 5 E* s4 T( l+ u" X& f$ {; b0 B
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。 ' y. }# P4 {# C
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(十一) 倒拆法
例子：
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。 / O+ f. _( y" M- K; [

(十二) 抽词拆句法 , \8 k  `0 A( o8 H
例子： 3 u2 I* T0 W( B
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. 5 T- ]2 B2 b# u8 c9 d" F
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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