[转载] 十二式翻译绝招 绝招, 转帖, 翻译

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(一) 同义反译法
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酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) 4 P$ T3 k* |! B/ J
2. I'll be here for good this time. ; O1 _4 Z- R  s; d
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」)
  @5 q) Z7 y% }3 m3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out. $ T7 h  s9 U0 |' `8 |
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) 6 c1 K4 m* h/ L5 P( J
4. "Wait, he is serious."
& A1 g7 w. R! {/ {「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) 2 P. ?! o# y6 T2 b) N% F% z* y( ]
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" 7 {2 z' M- s- D. o
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」)
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The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of . _2 l' D: D4 b0 Q4 ~
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
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到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。, P( [* Y" }& a' ]

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" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..." ; t4 n5 m" Z5 H5 B; d4 [
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」
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(四) 译词推陈出新 & A6 p; {  e& k8 v
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When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
; {/ Z0 m1 U1 O3 Z* ddoubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a ; E8 n. X" I' v! J" r4 Q
lower.
3 n  B8 }/ H: D. M! l0 @6 [9 s3 E! v原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
% ?) q, u% M" h+ U/ D* Z改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。
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when 当......的时候 等到......的时候
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4 i  i  m4 F! e( k8 g: m4 ^act with boldness 大胆行动 放胆去追求 & a' s& u" [5 E4 A* Q

9 K' R& Y4 ~, R& D4 E8 y5 Ma lover 一个情人 一般堕入情网的人
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕 种种常有的提心吊胆的心理
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(五) 解释性添词 2 C* a  g  S3 }
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"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have % j3 m/ F" a% A  q3 m9 u* K. _1 a) y! X
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I $ {. _9 [# t, O5 H4 n3 E* x$ ~
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet 9 O, l( t, |* v) S8 A: W! D3 ^
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
! j6 z! w! \3 F& L9 P- E+ j「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。 " ?3 ^- a0 \  V0 k1 S7 Y
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(六) 词无定译 + s2 V5 z! S1 j  X* o
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civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, ) I: x' \/ A2 w, g
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
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我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。
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(七) 精炼译词 6 h' D! j1 X( Z" B" m% K; `
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原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
. o- p9 l1 M5 B: b. |( O- A8 N6 F1 M改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。
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(八) 删削"When"字 $ P9 n* m1 b( U! F) {, ~) U
例子：
% }% F# q1 g/ u0 g9 t& E1. When he saw me, he was startled.
) \1 b+ I1 U2 W- Q+ k2 M4 B# h' F他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......)
( c5 |6 M9 a/ J2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the 4 q! x* B9 v% z
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「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)
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; \9 f, O' S3 [3 L( ~- w3 G5 b1 I(九) 感叹词的不同译法
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"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
2 j5 I+ D: K$ O1 e, Q2 b「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」
1 p8 }. U/ V+ C# X「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 2 l8 w) T  Y1 t3 A
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" / e8 Q" o: @6 E' ]
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
$ Z/ y% a: p2 D2 p% K' v, j3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") , x; w: Y- G6 M  A3 q
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to
; X/ }2 r; t2 Lkeep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
8 `- z' q$ E, G$ a5 B( Qjocularly; ... 2 [# p7 S7 A! D. m  O% q$ _4 ^: X4 _
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy , m3 @# O6 _% a+ `+ t) D( y- n
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(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」)
$ i' }* Y& _+ e6 l「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；...... " ]" z6 k" Y$ Q8 L, c3 Z
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 0 J; r: c* Q8 H( `( M( k8 Y
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(十) 顺拆法
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His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
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原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。
) T# G1 a, n8 o  }$ }改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。
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(十一) 倒拆法
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To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute / + {* O; L! h. ~& `0 a
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要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。
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5 @( r$ r: J7 B(十二) 抽词拆句法 1 C+ F; r9 m! M0 W) F7 o2 T0 ~
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All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the 9 w; G/ V3 @5 {: t. B& a: G0 M9 v
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
8 z8 S0 w) c7 [5 F( Agrowing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
' x5 X, P0 e/ c0 s2 u1 l从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。