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作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网" v7 m3 Y0 E5 B
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(一) 同义反译法
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1. Only three customers remained in the bar. O/ k1 V4 ^$ i+ }* i0 A3 o9 G; v3 v
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) / w# H4 k& ~5 O
2. I'll be here for good this time.
# r: i0 Y# G& {- f" N这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) 4 m& f7 @5 h/ E3 \- R0 p' V+ ?! @6 `
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
2 Y$ ~, R5 w, @' {我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) 6 n! u7 f+ p) G
4. "Wait, he is serious." & s) r7 _/ y: V" @9 f* I" g2 o4 D8 ]% _
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) + z1 @% E3 B. n/ @7 r, B& _
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" 2 A, i9 t' o' P+ V R5 D2 j
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」)
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(二) 删减解释词 4 j5 H; e ?- Y
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+ ~" f- l* d6 T; N! iThe traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of 5 @+ e# _8 @! ?3 }3 \) V( {! K
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
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到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。+ b2 K3 k8 ~4 s/ }3 S. }
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(三) 短句拆译
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" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..." ( i) o: J3 v! A) E
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」 3 }1 a. a8 P% J" S' w& {
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(四) 译词推陈出新
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; o- h- s8 `4 d! h" @% Q; ~When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with 0 |% c) i9 C' Q- n4 S, x5 _
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
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# `. e, v& x9 X W原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。 2 N2 G7 C, X7 q0 [
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 ! p" c; e9 Q9 W* e
原词 原译 改译
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when 当......的时候 等到......的时候
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act with boldness 大胆行动 放胆去追求 4 N& N# e. d3 T* r+ {
1 D( h A0 {" b$ G. M% Ga lover 一个情人 一般堕入情网的人 + R' i! i4 q7 t
% g' T0 u @/ @# `; nordinary fears 普通的害怕 种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 4 b3 p0 h! B0 g
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in addition to 除了......之外 那就更是难免的了
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(五) 解释性添词 : h- |5 z* [! g; s; A1 k4 o
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$ e8 J! M' y! m% \"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have 5 _% T9 U1 m0 w& R2 v
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I / A2 F0 Q/ b5 Q1 Y) G9 Q* U
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
1 h; o0 X5 ]: l% Yand the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
" Q/ F' w# t2 V「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。
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2 Q" _! X6 i; w6 ^ i(六) 词无定译 $ q. O0 J2 }# y: l
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It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or 8 `9 v8 [" y4 ?4 u1 o0 r( S
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, 7 x; _, V# j2 k5 M: c* e. u
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
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Q5 o H5 _8 c. V. |我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。+ u4 E4 e8 k P% E- y9 s( S( ?
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. W+ B3 X/ N: ?" x& z/ MA new dignity crept into his walk. ! [+ ^& D j5 K$ }( ?0 S: _- ?
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。 ( X/ ?" B2 k3 R
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。 8 k8 _8 H; n* J$ \9 h7 ^
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(八) 删削"When"字 7 U: J3 a% e6 H$ q a
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他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) 2 ]) I/ p: i% L) O: `3 Y$ Z
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
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9 K6 Y( C0 c7 w. I「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)
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1 H! y' `$ {9 ?" T: O7 b: y(九) 感叹词的不同译法
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1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
$ S: g" i$ S9 l7 c+ d7 I6 B) E1 Zthem!"
" e! V4 W2 G' W- R" e"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
! J4 P& Z1 O) t9 S9 P5 _「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」
) w/ F4 j: V# s' R |「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
2 O) @7 u4 W4 P% k5 V+ b2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" : w: L6 X5 H0 v$ T
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」 / R5 [' Y* m! v" V# H! h r5 a0 A4 L
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") 7 w% o+ T. o' z7 x, E0 B2 V- P
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to ; O* b& p8 K) O* q% W
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader, $ o" F2 h. I+ N: U: J
jocularly; ... 7 c& m. [) v$ [; Z& c$ u8 v
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy 1 Q( L/ R' z6 E6 H" |
interval of silence. 8 o; Z* `7 e% e1 A
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) 6 _, S3 [6 P/ n8 z
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
( J3 @6 y& p! L8 ?. k. Z7 P「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 " J! @+ e( v. @$ [# l/ R
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(十) 顺拆法 $ G. N7 J k0 Y% z1 D' y
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His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
+ a( c8 {0 V- v, m6 H# S/ T# v9 F: gworking/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
, r0 O& v( m+ Z9 R0 @+ l" Lsocial and demographic factors.
' h j6 W7 b$ K9 b; s* F s原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 6 }" {; ~6 L( h) H
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。 & A6 N8 B4 [3 m7 d
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(十一) 倒拆法 ! f( S" U1 k% S, ^& ^
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To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
& _5 Y- Z& v$ I2 z3 {for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
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X4 t+ ?% F5 T7 r/ N$ V要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。
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/ P( v' O- H1 z* x! _5 l(十二) 抽词拆句法
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All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
7 t1 d! ]: Z! i- _6 x0 j4 s. geye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of : h' I- v$ [* i$ z& a7 i
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
- K! l" B- _% h5 i从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。 |
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发表于 2008-7-16 14:27
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