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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网$ s. \2 g2 Z5 d, N0 u; ?$ y
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(一) 同义反译法 % A, L6 m( T; p" w5 ?
例子： 5 E  K$ ]$ q1 p! O- x# R4 c; e: Q7 V
1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) 8 |/ c5 V& J0 Y" B# y
2. I'll be here for good this time.
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) 0 P0 A. A" d0 C
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) ' b% @, ~4 N( A* ?9 b
4. "Wait, he is serious."
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) ! B6 W9 ^, J# c1 @
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" ) \1 t: \2 h! K, |: }+ |) D4 T; d
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」)
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(二) 删减解释词 ; ]5 j, A1 r5 F; }8 Y" o1 n8 ~/ G
例子： ) e( A3 @9 a+ F+ @
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women. 9 c. U* L- E- w+ Q$ A
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。# Q8 X+ {( y1 A" B. y7 O6 `. d

(三) 短句拆译
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」 9 ^; q( I+ Y% T) P2 ^

(四) 译词推陈出新 " r; F# v- x5 P% ], ~1 k
例子：
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with % B6 D1 ]( {8 M6 r* k- G
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a 2 d# T# ~; @. ^  k6 `; F
lower. / d( b% {3 K2 v: m  x$ H* ^
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。
原词原译改译
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when 当......的时候等到......的时候

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求

a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人 : ?& n4 u" m, {/ F# O" c
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 : K; B( {- i1 ?5 Z  p% ^

in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了. k, ^# ^% t$ h! h: b" M
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(五) 解释性添词
例子： 3 ^" A6 n; }/ ?
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I   T" S. x  m/ m
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet ! u$ Z4 T4 x5 x
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet. $ P; F! j0 }( a! M! x2 L
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。
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(六) 词无定译
例子： 5 m+ J- n' D5 \; z% Z
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or & P* M1 P# _. j( B, @2 K4 k* Q
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, 6 Q& Y2 ~" B4 q- y; z: R( W
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous + n! o8 ]0 O  T  W% d4 @* r, c
conditions. 1 Z8 Y$ n$ C$ l1 L( C
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。

(七) 精炼译词
例子： ( V6 A$ T9 Q/ q9 Y) z
A new dignity crept into his walk.
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。 : E& H1 Y& @* ?5 J
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。
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(八) 删削"When"字
例子：+ [, h" Z. E; X; e4 j
1. When he saw me, he was startled. * ^. \" G7 x% b4 r% U6 \1 ]
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) 5 j; ?" q( _; i9 i( Q& o
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
head, and knocking on them round?" 7 M5 `" ^, e8 O* Y
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)   p- S& |9 Y, A8 V
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(九) 感叹词的不同译法 5 u0 Y# |( B* s2 ?1 {
例子：
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want 1 K( E1 b$ B8 K: a. P7 K
them!" ) @( i1 A' k5 X; T
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 8 I8 g, |" A- E2 T. w: x1 u- y
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?"
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」 ; l) n% X+ }: S) w" \2 n4 H+ h
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.")
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to 2 u' O  @6 s+ b1 R+ k
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
jocularly; ... : C( Q5 s- F# ~( q" J& b
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
interval of silence.
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) ! O6 E4 w  t6 `' l0 G
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；...... " h: p9 _% T8 A, P' i3 p, Y
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。
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(十) 顺拆法
例子：
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic, 6 w6 R) z8 L% x% C/ \. E
social and demographic factors.
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 7 n8 T- F( Q7 R3 A1 v8 w) E
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。

(十一) 倒拆法
例子：
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his # }5 _  L+ _# t5 h6 D9 p
supposed conditon. ( b1 L! U( I  J, \1 Y/ ^
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。
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(十二) 抽词拆句法 ) n( x6 ]! f# h/ Y* T& d
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. ' k3 ]: b: m7 W8 P4 p
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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