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作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网
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. w0 N! I x3 m/ |- C(一) 同义反译法
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1. Only three customers remained in the bar. ! Z, {9 _( {% R, a+ ~
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
# P1 {3 I5 N7 T$ R0 p% {2 `2. I'll be here for good this time. 3 U x C) }: `! T7 }: L
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」)
, P/ v x1 ]' G9 j3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out. , z) {% a# w# y! |6 l$ D/ {
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) ; ], M# ~# |; n) E1 \& s' o
4. "Wait, he is serious."
2 { |0 a5 n" t6 N/ K6 P! m「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」)
* X$ ~( T' ^* O& ~; j7 e. r5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
% C4 L y9 J: [. F; U+ z「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」)
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# u$ N' H: f2 D! ^& {3 G% F(二) 删减解释词 2 Z5 U g7 I9 w+ {/ `
例子：
1 P* U5 ?% B6 n1 J4 rThe traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
2 @) @8 u" U4 r. Q) G: c/ M8 Jrefinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a : K" {) K Z; y+ i% N% B+ W' [: @
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women. ' M) u' G8 O' w8 K" G) w( n5 U
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。
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$ g4 g8 o" h q9 T(三) 短句拆译
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" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..." - f+ H. ~- y' A
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」 9 a6 F% J1 p: F' y6 ~4 s0 n! C
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(四) 译词推陈出新 . {; ? B# \3 M- J* D
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* l* S, C; R6 }% P2 HWhen he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with 3 j$ g! ?; a+ l$ s& a
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
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% H3 N2 I! m. C! E8 @6 l原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
. O% Z# m# S6 N( ]4 d改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。
' y: F) _ U' b1 x {原词 原译 改译
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7 c$ b0 c9 W& F6 Swhen 当......的时候 等到......的时候 / p8 {4 z [' ^3 U$ O
8 G& w' X! X @9 d- ?% D) r. hact with boldness 大胆行动 放胆去追求
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. V( X8 |$ M7 h* J4 H/ M- o, ja lover 一个情人 一般堕入情网的人
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕 种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 p3 g$ B# Q& L C% w: N
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in addition to 除了......之外 那就更是难免的了% J/ D! G* @2 ~
, X% C9 F8 K$ c1 q) Z' ](五) 解释性添词 " A" d6 G& `! s0 U' O
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"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have . i% {4 W \0 W8 n( e
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
) d, k. ^, r: a1 a% wnever thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet " u, x& `5 o6 {3 ], R
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet. $ |7 K: d; S. n
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。 " M- I0 t o6 a9 i) J7 O( B
0 ` N/ ]$ Y$ `' R(六) 词无定译 4 F! \) N4 ?% N2 [8 |
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It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or
& Y% g5 T& W2 N: q. e' h& T3 A" dcivilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, # E3 e! y6 f# L
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous 1 o, Y7 ?3 J3 B
conditions. * i( O$ E2 H: e' y1 y) K
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。
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- i! V) c9 b8 W! Z0 | J/ ~(七) 精炼译词
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9 _# |& H* R6 O0 v8 `( k' TA new dignity crept into his walk.
1 |1 L& ^. Q1 C) |+ |* u, f+ z原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
1 w" ~+ c" r& o/ L1 O改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。 6 T! \, c7 K. T6 d& R) {0 N: Y2 T' q
9 a/ ~3 k1 t z5 u, i- f(八) 删削"When"字 : |$ Q$ m8 J; o3 @7 b! y
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1. When he saw me, he was startled. # @8 g! `9 Y8 A7 x* b: |3 O4 [* M
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) 0 ?# I5 W$ ?! j5 F" G5 |0 o" y
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
# }! L% z( s! o* ?& N. R" S4 Zhead, and knocking on them round?" [# a: y3 q8 Y% R, v* b% I% {. l5 p
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......) 7 p, ?. ~7 S/ \
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(九) 感叹词的不同译法
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1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want ( V) Q+ G" {, C: ?+ t
them!"
0 |, A: q3 y% e; ]# ~7 P5 n"Why, Eva, your room is full now." 9 M" m+ g7 w( p
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」
# @- L! [: G7 N, x( b「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
# S. X0 s2 ^, T2 E2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" 6 T5 o% |; r0 j9 r& t$ G( T
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
6 \9 _; Z! G+ L3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") ( q( J* u" ?8 f1 V/ n, N
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to
5 g ?" ?1 q! | c; y. bkeep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
8 d" ^, Y- y& z! |! G4 L" Tjocularly; ...
8 Z+ p. J) [; J8 s2 `8 j"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
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(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」)
+ \* t3 n6 u/ L- B* V6 m/ U/ k( x「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
. k( p. M/ m1 B' ?8 D; b; _「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 ) Z, g0 B8 t" Y
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(十) 顺拆法
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His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue $ I7 e3 f4 O& C4 M9 U
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
: N" X e4 n8 nsocial and demographic factors.
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改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。 $ L9 O2 _4 B9 }. c3 w( R6 U
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(十一) 倒拆法 % p! K; X: d3 L, B8 a: y
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' N1 T& o' a! G( e" `7 h! STo him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute / + k, n. ^, H* v* o- P/ y5 F
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his - w7 D0 W: q9 U t" a$ z
supposed conditon. . g L) @% A- v' |) j# n- }
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。
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# a- f5 X j& w2 d5 `. A(十二) 抽词拆句法 * @5 ]6 {, W, |+ ]$ C0 z. @
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All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the * Z0 S& e* P/ f5 M2 o. V* J. R
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
) ^1 d% _# p2 \. a7 s. E& egrowing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
& g( g% _0 U* I s从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。 |
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