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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网

(一) 同义反译法
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar. : i: f9 M/ n9 x! W& Z' U
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
2. I'll be here for good this time.
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) 2 k: l* I: U; Z8 G- @& }
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) 4 Q* a7 O0 e' ?' X
4. "Wait, he is serious." $ o8 }# I7 S% T% |" @$ G
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) 9 ~- L$ k! X# N+ s  G/ x% s2 a
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) - j4 |/ F) b0 x
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(二) 删减解释词
例子： % C# |8 ~6 Q1 m/ ?9 F; |0 |
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of & F7 ^5 i8 ~4 T
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a 8 D1 |  ^( ^- N( f+ _# l
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。  P$ m: q8 Y6 x# s3 `; Z& Q$ `% Y& x

(三) 短句拆译 ( s5 Y9 Q0 z- \& [2 D1 x
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」
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(四) 译词推陈出新 + J; G* B! L( y4 u5 k
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When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
lower. + T% ]# C2 a" w4 }1 ^7 I
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 ; \7 h! `' M& C9 {+ m
原词原译改译

when 当......的时候等到......的时候 + y6 m* N) r2 |4 x6 o+ J# P3 s: s5 |) M. n

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求 6 X; e+ o6 g! Q7 v/ h  R
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a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 : h0 B$ y  h; y, I2 w
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了+ d3 @3 B8 v0 V5 e/ Z0 U/ W
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(五) 解释性添词
例子：
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have / L4 b6 p2 V5 g
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I ) B  s4 m( C+ w
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet. $ w7 s; _3 W3 K3 K! [% s  c
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。
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(六) 词无定译 4 L2 N* F2 M. h- h3 M
例子： / m3 M7 U3 k; @5 f$ i
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or $ h7 J0 k. W) ]$ T8 e4 Z
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, 3 E2 j$ D( K# [9 j7 u  f
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions. & w4 W2 n0 O, y0 A7 \/ i
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。

(七) 精炼译词 - f( P; f  h+ k
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A new dignity crept into his walk.
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。 ) v* j+ b7 G- j# t/ w
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。
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(八) 删削"When"字
例子：/ G8 y" R# T" e9 F( _; t. w6 ?
1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) 3 X1 Z. }& @. A* K
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the * l/ A* `5 a- w# K
head, and knocking on them round?" & y! O- }8 a$ O8 j# Q
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)

(九) 感叹词的不同译法 . M9 x) l* m' u. }6 o. X
例子：
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want 2 v! [9 D  S; g* O5 @
them!" 7 v/ s. I. I' k+ M! g  Z/ G
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 ! F+ u! ]% _2 l) S, e+ n7 H3 e, ~
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 - }9 F0 T" \  E: [4 }1 |4 j) X* b# _
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" ' q. \/ z; B& `
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」 # p! d0 A" f0 l3 b  l
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") & S& e7 P5 T7 L3 t
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to ' ?. [0 Q# [7 ^7 P$ Q+ V  U/ Y
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader, 2 O8 I& |* H, D8 ^5 H7 s3 {# }6 w4 U
jocularly; ...
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
interval of silence. $ A; u3 K+ ~- S3 i5 D1 p4 ?5 ?% M
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」)
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。
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(十) 顺拆法
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His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue 8 C" w$ |; f% w- _
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors.
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。
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(十一) 倒拆法 $ Y7 ~0 d8 v/ ^! J- k0 B$ M" M
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To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his 1 M2 t+ j7 N, l" {. k
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。 7 G. ]. h6 R; Y
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(十二) 抽词拆句法
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All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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