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作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网
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(一) 同义反译法 : L \+ V) K( j' w6 }% ~' B
例子： 9 |8 _1 _& B+ n, Z, X
1. Only three customers remained in the bar. 2 p7 [9 H0 j6 U- V" ]0 U2 b i. p
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) / T$ [# D" Y. ~: E1 Z8 g& D
2. I'll be here for good this time. $ F7 B& I7 n, T- a3 i/ X+ Z+ Z
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) " ~8 C% X! X/ `3 o
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out. 0 W5 B; Q+ J! \! Q" |/ A1 `$ X
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) ! g+ N# E* `0 X7 Z# R
4. "Wait, he is serious."
! q/ W$ F) F$ T; V l「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) ' Q. [5 b, Q1 |) r- A( J# N% e
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" 1 f9 l! E! J5 h
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) ! T% a6 `" R4 _1 q i* D8 I9 Y7 M3 M
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(二) 删减解释词 9 f& y1 C$ a; U) n# G/ q) F
例子： / [4 U: a3 p9 J. E7 H! T+ M0 c
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
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particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women. 4 O7 y. w* }. h% R
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。9 p* ]; A7 m$ t$ a9 y% |
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(三) 短句拆译 7 O+ c# U( P8 [# t4 s6 j
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" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
* I5 |% J8 e8 x9 R5 e1 S; l「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」
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9 f, B5 U j) o2 {9 y ]& Q(四) 译词推陈出新
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When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with 8 ^+ {# w" s+ g9 y" F! H. m, N
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a $ `, o. B4 Q1 S5 J% T ^% L
lower.
2 j/ |4 J+ J5 E* o1 g原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。 6 b \5 C F' Z# L) M2 [- P5 R
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 " r; Q7 Q; j4 l5 @ I* r# k' n5 t, q
原词 原译 改译 % n j. J1 b9 m2 ` h! R
; M6 v: L" h \- C5 F4 C2 q3 twhen 当......的时候 等到......的时候
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$ V3 o& _) S0 t) D0 X5 S8 y: [act with boldness 大胆行动 放胆去追求 4 j) j4 y4 O% H \
2 i4 ^8 _7 a2 ua lover 一个情人 一般堕入情网的人
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕 种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 & r* a1 a8 v4 F& p
: X' t, D, j( t2 k+ m c3 s, kin addition to 除了......之外 那就更是难免的了1 Y- K6 `+ l( M5 F \
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(五) 解释性添词 ( f. E3 S, O' U* |5 r
例子：
9 P1 ?: R% y h$ C"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have
I% {4 A7 l C1 Z+ hdone it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
& J& v1 j( c. E0 a/ Snever thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet % ^: f) s$ K8 c% \8 i: W0 G
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
/ m. N+ P% }. _$ v6 J「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。 ; \6 c% O3 x/ h* ]
. z1 T9 o" R4 F! p% o7 ](六) 词无定译 & Q% P' S, b9 h$ ?3 Z1 I% ^
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It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or
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he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous " T8 m0 V0 X" t0 t: F& H4 h6 h
conditions.
1 J; F0 g, R9 O! n O我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。7 o6 [9 h9 h: k
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(七) 精炼译词
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& h" A% \! K! I/ Q/ PA new dignity crept into his walk. 1 }- h3 K8 |5 `& H; x) t
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。 5 Q0 c' Z: N2 a! n) D2 y6 j, F
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。
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+ U$ i' C2 i2 A* m& f( U, f(八) 删削"When"字 - |* N+ a+ S0 _! d. o
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1. When he saw me, he was startled.
6 m$ @) o: X) o0 c. h# ?' L6 t他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) ( n& J, q9 m; b- p) x n
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the . e; z# m: \% z2 [* a) z$ Z1 q) I4 t
head, and knocking on them round?" & [+ \9 k3 T, Q0 X. X
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)
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(九) 感叹词的不同译法 3 x" H. N7 {. ] I
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1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
" h4 a1 k3 q: l3 x7 [them!" & z* |0 ~* Q8 [/ C+ E: q- g% o7 _/ ?
"Why, Eva, your room is full now." 6 k5 [1 v1 o: k; K( g
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 ' s2 @* z! ~7 u4 c# E
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 2 H3 j% D7 y2 Z. W
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?"
5 J! `4 N5 d1 J/ f「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
' O) ^* p( ^+ z' i4 Y3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") ; _9 ^. h& u; M
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to 4 s; A2 W5 T |
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
6 g2 J) p% h9 ?3 n0 gjocularly; ... , Z5 ]* f2 c/ R' C0 S
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy % [+ @" W0 {; T# n6 j ]2 r
interval of silence. 8 W7 ] p& a7 d9 m0 d; S' v
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) 1 t9 H( h5 x7 q t. m
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；...... + K6 D9 R9 p. h& i
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。
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, s+ ^9 I/ e( R }3 F# }: |! ~(十) 顺拆法 8 l4 Z( y! R" ~* m2 }; }
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His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue / g+ f( R/ O8 w' C
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
3 P; i2 _, D) N% Esocial and demographic factors. 6 L# ~+ T3 e* w7 b
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 . C* S( ~& q2 O2 Y! b
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。
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(十一) 倒拆法
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for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his . o+ o# q7 s; A1 C3 V; E
supposed conditon. 1 Y5 |6 N; Z" T d3 Z$ I6 w( @
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。 ) P4 t0 q$ \6 Q, F
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(十二) 抽词拆句法 C: |" Q' r5 [5 Q* i4 [ b
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All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the 6 C m1 A# t S) _9 Q+ V
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
( R7 J. Z% o) \7 Wgrowing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. 5 A- O7 k, p% z% \/ Q2 z
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。 |
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