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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网

(一) 同义反译法 " q7 y' |! i; @7 B& Q
例子： * v& F8 v1 ~8 T, W) q
1. Only three customers remained in the bar. $ K$ E- _( Y3 c" [* J  F4 `
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
2. I'll be here for good this time. ; v4 i, n& y6 |& g; |9 a
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) ' H# `( Z" {- J) a9 q8 a
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) 0 j0 B9 z( u/ S9 ~/ D
4. "Wait, he is serious."
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) + R' z3 ?! g5 o
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) ' P. {( M; i( ]- M
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(二) 删减解释词 - k* Z5 c1 v' F+ W. L2 j5 q
例子：
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a : X7 d+ B+ M1 J# I: z& a! x$ h
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。
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(三) 短句拆译 ) k8 S& U8 h8 I8 S! f
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..." 6 u+ m3 f6 ~2 q2 S% d. \
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」
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(四) 译词推陈出新 : I( A- E1 H1 _+ o
例子： , G  }& M' t6 d9 N, R
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
lower.
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。
原词原译改译 : m. r# i- C; k- }" t  ?- ~9 C

when 当......的时候等到......的时候

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求

a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人 ' l$ f7 s  X/ ^# V

ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了3 N0 {) U  }4 @9 B) d* j
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(五) 解释性添词
例子：
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet ) P1 j! z% M2 v- i
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet. - T: @* s- ~; k
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。 3 \, n. K/ s- Q6 r# u0 n1 j. l8 o

(六) 词无定译 9 k! ^! d" S; `8 x
例子：
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or / S2 l! s/ w+ P% e6 W6 m+ Y
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, ; N5 \  _# s* R8 W  W; \
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions.
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。/ q8 }1 \, e: t! f# t1 v/ R  Y

(七) 精炼译词 . T' ~* r( p/ D: e
例子： 7 t  O8 G4 S5 a
A new dignity crept into his walk. 0 K& i5 b- q( }3 a4 \: ]
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。 $ T  r4 b6 j+ Y- V4 u# L
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(八) 删削"When"字
例子：
1. When he saw me, he was startled. ; f! b" r, I2 ?4 Q2 L0 F/ `3 |9 {# M$ x
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......)
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
head, and knocking on them round?" ' J. r" w8 [9 z/ Y, a
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)

(九) 感叹词的不同译法 + E5 H4 L* i! b* y& P
例子：
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
them!" + A' k) t% i8 e. A2 {
"Why, Eva, your room is full now." 9 d( `. R1 I& Q) Z
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" , X, V3 g. p( F7 G' J5 M
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」 , ]5 Y- [% g* f! r. f9 d
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") ) g) f- N5 d) ^7 L* Y
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
jocularly; ...
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy / ?- F0 C0 c! m- J8 y6 ^
interval of silence.
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) 1 k6 H" t% ]! C6 P# j3 h! Y+ f
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；...... $ G' V! D  x" s5 R9 `
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。

(十) 顺拆法 7 a  {2 P2 R% I& D# l, ~, Z3 M
例子： $ `8 R4 Y3 @' Y# l+ A/ V9 c
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic, % ?6 }: Z5 U% Y: S; D7 Q( s* P7 d% k
social and demographic factors.
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 3 L% I+ ^& {1 M
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。 / j$ Z) f4 m2 {9 z& L* y

(十一) 倒拆法 / s/ r5 Q  r, r" @4 M
例子：
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute / + T" c) D, `2 p% {) v* R
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon. / y0 C/ Q/ h' l6 F2 b& ?% O1 w
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。
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(十二) 抽词拆句法   Y6 Q' x7 g0 h- t
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. , ~7 K- L! T/ Y9 Y. B) p7 b$ p7 N
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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